First off, I'd like to say I won't post my story online, unless I change my mind. I'm too scared to post it, I'm not sure if it's any good. O-O I had too much lag to tell you guys my story plot in the game, so I want to tell you guys here. And I want to hear your suggestions and opinions. Be nice about it.
This is a fantasy about two sisters, May (Short for Maydel, I made up the name >

) and Jessie (Short for Jessica)ages 11 and 15, who hear hunters in the forest near their house in the middle of the night, and more importantly, also near a special lake that has rocks that, if you blow on them, glow green and show a mystical symbol. They run out to see a unicorn who just got shot outside of the lake. They must do what the unicorn's last words tell them to do, which is to retreave a golden lamp from the Dwarf queen's palace. The thing is, the palace is underground, and in China (They live in Canada in a farmhouse O-O). They get captured for invading, and put in the palace jail. But will they get out in time to fill the unicorn's prophecy? O-O (I don't have much more than that)
Put suggestions, or opinions, in the comments, and thanks for showing some care by reading this